Six Sentence Sunday – Don't Forget Me
April 29, 2012
Six sentences from my latest Konigsburg book, Don’t Forget Me. The hero and heroine, Nando and Kit, are former lovers who broke up. Kit left Konigsburg for San Antonio, but now she’s back. And this is Nando’s first sight of her on Main Street.
Hell, he didn’t even want her to see him just yet, not until he figured out what exactly he was going to say to her, And how he was going to say it. And what it would mean.
Kit Maldonado back in Konigsburg.
For a moment he swore he could almost hear his brother Esteban laughing. The force of karma had just sunk its teeth firmly into his ass.
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I like an unsure hero, and very much liked the humour at the end. Great six!
Thanks!
Perfect last line!
Great 6, I love his reaction, how he’s scrambling, and then the last line!
Thanks, y’all!
Love his reaction to her! And that last line! 🙂
Great internal dialogue. Sounds just like a guy.
Glad you like it!
Nice last line!